Score: 10

"Good job."

submission: CT: Apocalypse IV

date: August 18, 2009

I will say that i am not the biggest fan of sprite movies. Though this one did catch my eye as not the normal sprite flash.

The sprites you used and the way you used them were really good. It all runs smoothly and feels like a good video game. As Fro said the battle scens could have used a bit of work, but that really did not make a difference since the overall content of the submission was really good.

The Audio was another strong point in you submission since it went along with what was going on in each part of the flash...it had the perfect rythem to the different parts.

There was alot of reading, but worth the time spent on in.
Really good job.

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Score: 1

"It was not helpfull"

submission: Piggy123s flash tutorial

date: August 12, 2009

This is just useless. Some of the buttons did not work and if they did they did not yeald to much information. Take for example, the dress up game link lead to a blank circle and nothing more.

Before you make another one, make sure you have all of the buttons working and when you click something thers something to learn in each section and not just a circle or some random actionscript. i really think that you did not put to much effort into this at all and needs to be worked on alot.

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Score: 4

"not good, but not great"

submission: human actions drawing tut

date: August 12, 2009

It was a very short tutorial, i looked at it.

The wording was unclear some of the time and just all over the place. All of the drawings were crude and not the best of quality.

there were somethings that this lacked. Organization was one of them, i believe it was the final screen that showed all of thoes mouths and faces that just made no sence to include at the ending since they did not seem like much of a help to me or anyone.

It also would be a need for a replay button since you have to hit the refresh button to view it again. Also it would be nice to have a back button if you want to see somthing again. that would seem to be the biggest problem you have here.

Needs alot of work, but i think your up for it.

Review Request Club

Score: 6

"ok,"

submission: Sad Link

date: August 12, 2009

It was on the short side, i was confused whenit ened so fast. It looked like it had more to it.

The animation style i liked, that sloppy style you used is somethnig i'm a fan of, so that was good, the background would suffice for what you were going for. Nothing to complex. Then it was trying to be funny, but it really did not find it too funny.

It was short and to the point, could use some work.

Review Request Club

Score: 7

"nice, but needs some improvements"

submission: DeDeDe´s Minions Ep. 2

date: August 12, 2009

It was good, don't get me wrong. I'm just not to much of a fan of this 8bit stuff.

The thing that needs the most work is the voice acting it was not that good, i think if you spent alot more time on that it would have been alot better.

The story was funny, nothing that made me start cracking up. But i smiled and thats good, most things here don't even make me do that.

it was good, could use some work.

Review Request Club

Score: 6

"too short"

submission: Don't Fuck With Tray

date: August 12, 2009

I liked what you had done, but i think there could have been so much more put forth.

Your graphics were well done, i like the cartoonish style you are using. The background could use some work since it's a actual picture and not drawn. I think it could have been better if you did the backgroud in the same style as your characters.

thers not to much of a story if there is one at all, but since it's about 10 seconds i don't think so, not to much to say about that. The one voice was great and sounded like you knew what you were doing and the other one was not distinct enough to know what he was saying.

It was good, just way to short.

Review Request Club

Score: 6

"could use some work"

submission: The Blues

date: August 12, 2009

First off, you did good with the audio you had choesn to make a flash around it

Well, it was generaly not to entertaining to say the least. I liked how you showed the mother gettinf aggravated after the father had given the son that gift. But the story was lacking some action.

The animation style was dull and, did not use different shades of color, i did like the style you uesed. It just needed some shading in some places. When you tried to lip-sync with the mother, it was alittle off and could be fixed if you know how.

I have to say it was unique and was something special.

Review Request Club

Score: 6

"it's okey"

submission: A Christmas Story SB

date: August 12, 2009

It's really hard to make review on a sound board. I think i would be much better to have a different photo with evey different one you click. You could also fix the problem where you play something and then you want to stop it. I did see the link in the corner that does that. I think it still would be better if you had something playing and then you clicked something else; the first thing would then stop playing.

Did you make thoes sound yourself. Or did you find them on some website. Some of them overlaped one another, and that just did not seem to be what you would want them to be.

Not bad, but needs some work

Review Request Club

Score: 8

"a average quiz"

submission: Ultimate NG Quiz

date: August 12, 2009

It was one of the better quizes i have played in awhile.

I played on hard mode, nothing you could not answer with your computers calculator and the the NG FAQ. The layout was good and your choice of music fit it perfectly.

Some of the questions were hard, and not the normal user could just guss right. Good move by making it if you guss wrong you go back to the start, it prevents someone from just gussing 3 times and then getting the right answer.

The only thing i did not like was the way you had to click the button at the bottom, it would be easier if you made the words clickable for various reasons.

I did like it alot, good job.

Review Request Club

Score: 5

"good, but needs work"

submission: Sonic:The Search for Love

date: August 12, 2009

Well.... i like the idea.

I did like the story/idea of this piece. It has some good potential, but the simple animation was just poor and needed to be much better. The white background and black animation was just simple and i think adding color would be so much better, with variations of the same color.

Not to be a grammer nazi, but it just made it seem so childish and it did not fit. I don't know if thoes were mistakes or done with intention. With the speaker talking in the same mannor, i don't know why you would do this. One of the major flaws of this.

I think you should also spend some time practicing to make your drawings a bit better, maby take a look at the tutorial section of the site.

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