It was on the short side, i was confused whenit ened so fast. It looked like it had more to it.
The animation style i liked, that sloppy style you used is somethnig i'm a fan of, so that was good, the background would suffice for what you were going for. Nothing to complex. Then it was trying to be funny, but it really did not find it too funny.
It was short and to the point, could use some work.
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I liked what you had done, but i think there could have been so much more put forth.
Your graphics were well done, i like the cartoonish style you are using. The background could use some work since it's a actual picture and not drawn. I think it could have been better if you did the backgroud in the same style as your characters.
thers not to much of a story if there is one at all, but since it's about 10 seconds i don't think so, not to much to say about that. The one voice was great and sounded like you knew what you were doing and the other one was not distinct enough to know what he was saying.
It was good, just way to short.
could use some work
First off, you did good with the audio you had choesn to make a flash around it
Well, it was generaly not to entertaining to say the least. I liked how you showed the mother gettinf aggravated after the father had given the son that gift. But the story was lacking some action.
The animation style was dull and, did not use different shades of color, i did like the style you uesed. It just needed some shading in some places. When you tried to lip-sync with the mother, it was alittle off and could be fixed if you know how.
I have to say it was unique and was something special.
It was not helpfull
This is just useless. Some of the buttons did not work and if they did they did not yeald to much information. Take for example, the dress up game link lead to a blank circle and nothing more.
Before you make another one, make sure you have all of the buttons working and when you click something thers something to learn in each section and not just a circle or some random actionscript. i really think that you did not put to much effort into this at all and needs to be worked on alot.
ok thanks i am working on a really big new tut with working buttons and that screen is the end of the movement tutorial
not good, but not great
It was a very short tutorial, i looked at it.
The wording was unclear some of the time and just all over the place. All of the drawings were crude and not the best of quality.
there were somethings that this lacked. Organization was one of them, i believe it was the final screen that showed all of thoes mouths and faces that just made no sence to include at the ending since they did not seem like much of a help to me or anyone.
It also would be a need for a replay button since you have to hit the refresh button to view it again. Also it would be nice to have a back button if you want to see somthing again. that would seem to be the biggest problem you have here.
Needs alot of work, but i think your up for it.
we are thanks
It's really hard to make review on a sound board. I think i would be much better to have a different photo with evey different one you click. You could also fix the problem where you play something and then you want to stop it. I did see the link in the corner that does that. I think it still would be better if you had something playing and then you clicked something else; the first thing would then stop playing.
Did you make thoes sound yourself. Or did you find them on some website. Some of them overlaped one another, and that just did not seem to be what you would want them to be.
Not bad, but needs some work
not to bad
It's a nice twist ot a clasic song, i like around 47 seconds the most. Good job and keep up the good work.
Thanks dude :) Merry christmas!
it better than....
the original in my opinion ,i loved it ,just was too fast in some parts oterwisw great job 10/10 :)its well deserved
um it waz okey, could use work
It has a very modern look to it and cought my eye :::how ironic::: but ya its very good and i'd like to see more.
Thanks. Art is one thing I quite like, but I'm never really brilliant at it, just the occasional doodle here and there, so I dunno when I'll have more, or what I'll have, maybe I could try drawing something good in MS paint, or something... You never know.
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